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Blood on Her Hands
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With this piece I was pretty narrowly focused when I wrote it. It is reminiscent of a story about Jesus (John 9) giving sight to a blind man. He spat on the ground and made mud with the saliva and placed it on the blind man’s eyes and the blind man could then see. One interpretation of my poem might be, J was distracted by the church and its blindness. His effort to heal it was futile. What looked like nasty, ugly mud that dirtied a little girl in a white dress, had an affect on her when she came of age. Whether it affected her for good, or not, is left up to the reader.


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Blood on Her Hands

 

J rode up on his knucklehead

            Chopped

                        Old school

            Parked

            Chains

            Black boots

            Greasy hands

He spat on the ground

            Lots

                        Black chew

                                    Hot dry day

J turned to walk away

            Stopped

            Mister Blunt started to sing

                        “Beautiful Dawn…”

                                    He was High

Something caught J’s eye

                        Red church door

            Stooped

Greasy finger mixing spit and dirt and chew

            Mud and clay

                        People watched

                                    Gross!

Picking up mud and clay

            Threw it at the red door

                        Fell short

                                    On the concrete slab

J turned

            Sauntered slowly

                        Into Fat Bob’s Biker Bar

 

 

 

Little girl

            Pretty white dress

                        Leaving the church

            Stepped in the mud

Many years later she turned 18

            Blood

                        Oozed from her hands

                                    STIGMATA!

 

Dayvid Graybill © 2013

                       

 


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 Reviews of "Blood on Her Hands"
Reviewed on June 21, 2013
every action creates a reaction
and an everlasting imprint

Bone Bead Leathers &
Teal Boots
Vickie

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 20, 2013
Dennis Hopper makes a fine J. Too bad he's dead. I'm sorry, but I didn't get the connection (like Sage did?). Perhaps you'll have to write the short story so that I can piece together the pieces. Reads like something that Stephen King would write, but then, he maybe already has.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on June 20, 2013
Stark. Gritty to the nth. Blood seepage.

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on June 20, 2013
Dark stuff...but damn good.
Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed on June 20, 2013
I'm picturing this as a movie. Freaky stuff. I like it.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on June 20, 2013
Stigmata of the Witch

brand for identification,
crown of thorns, tears
of blood em-bed-ded in
the cottonwood, wounds
in the aspen bark, elk
rubbed a cross with his
spiritual antlers, the trees
growing together to form
a veil, the cottonwood
groves, Colorado's most
productive natural ecosystem,
of great diversity and abundant
life, food and shelter for wildlife,
emerald and black tapestry,
habitat for the witch, her spells
cast from the horsehair-weaved
magpie nest, the witch informed
the woodcutter the tree he intended
to "convert" to furniture crafted
by the Amish had good spirits
living inside and no curse would
be applied, she helped him load
the tree on his horse-drawn sled
while she bled red,

she is marked with
purpura, the witch's
purple hemorrhage
of blood on her hand
and foot affected equally,
punctured in the wilderness,
non-Christian, the sage,
a contemplater of tutelary
spirits, mystically inducing
the Stigmata of the Witch
in meditation of the itiriti
snake, kundalini, a dynamic
rapport with The Stigmata
of the Witch, a quick healing
process...


Copyright 11/17/2009 Ms. Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist



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