Mushroom Theatre (poem) by Dayvid Graybill on AuthorsDen

Mushroom Theatre
by Dayvid Graybill → (All Poetry by Dayvid Graybill)
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I spent a week in a heavily concentrated area of Mennonites a week ago. After a conversation with a Menno pastor/friend I came away knowing I never want to live in a "Menno Mecca."
Mushroom Theatre Lines drawn in the desert sands of time Sun days filled with heatred melting Golden language skewed in tabernacle Meetings with f*ed up thoughts of God. Piled high in long mushroom houses of shit Mennonite pastors fly dark flags of love Creatively cursing sacred creative life Harrisonburg mecca of black clothed souls. Pacifistic lines across war torn homogeneity Stop intruders bringing tithes of theological Surprises to red tents of Mennonite popes For the grand exposé of war-crimes hidden. The Greek and Hebrew in a whirlwind mix Pneuma and dabar bend theology f*ed Without cause nor reason toward interpretation Of life in a theatre of compassion-filled mimes. Dayvid Graybill (C) 2013

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on October 8, 2013

David, Your poetry is always thought-provoking...Interesting.

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on October 3, 2013

I am counting MY Blessings!!

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on September 30, 2013

From what I read, your deeply satirical poem is helping to reveal the true cult-ure of the Mennonite world. Having descended from some old order Amish, I'm finding the TV reality soap opera, Amish Mafia, quite interesting.

Now that the Mennonites have moved into central Wisconsin, buying up farmland and ripping out the electricity and other conveniences from the farmhouses, how do they withstand two weeks of 20 below zero? Potbelly stoves don't do a very good job of heating an uninsulated house. Ask my relatives who live there.

Ron

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on September 29, 2013

When will an overlord come in and douche it all? We're waiting...Operation Overlord...allied logistics, intelligence, morale and Psilocybin Mushrooms power in Menno tea...drink an' ye shall see illusion...prophet or profit? Sarah Winnemucca over Menno Mecca!

Jesus Christ Superstar killed Mel Gibson's Passion of Christ,
Sage

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

They are like mushrooms in what I read here......kept in the "dark" and fed a lot of "shit".

Love ya!

Jane