Wow this is just splendid. When we write exactly the way we want and how we exactly feel then we all can relate or feel it. it is always an indeed pleasure to read your poetry especially ones with so much meaning and easy to understand. Keep writing and never stop. Love Aleja Bennett.
The symbols that float in and out of this poem just past the readers eyes are often sad, lost and maybe just a little disillusioned but time may alleviate the little girl lost.
Compelling to be sure!
Love, Suzie :-D
well written, Mariah ...
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This is very good.
Love,
mom