Based upon one of those seemingly-mundane incidents which, upon reflection, provided much food for thought.
My daughter captured a gigantic bug.
In time-honored fashion of huntress youth
she brought it to me in a mayo jar,
thrust the imprisoned bug up at my nose,
shouting her triumph in ruddy-faced glee:
"Check him out, Mama, isn't he UGLY?!"
Despite disgust I couldn't help but look
and saw she'd caught a huge carpenter bee,
fat, black, what the kids call a "flying grape";
how she'd trapped it I couldn't bear to think.
I asked her what she planned to do with that
mean buzzing trophy of her derring-do;
she looked at me with great indignation,
"Well I am going to KEEP him of course!"
Then looking closer into the glass jail
I saw that in its efforts to escape
the frenzied insect was wrecking itself,
with snapped antennae and a dragging leg;
beating, beating, beating against the glass,
willing to die, if necessary, to be free.
And I know that feeling... I do, I do.
So though I knew my daughter would hate me,
I took her outside and we let the bug go.
I like the way you were inspired by this event, and how you shared it with the reader. After reading La Vieja Loca, then this one, I found the same kind of empathy and identification with your "character" and, once again, I was able to empathize with the narrator.
Dear readers, this is my third book of poems, and inside are a special collection of what have turned out to be not only MY personal favorites, but also the favorites of many of YOU. Some of these have never been available in print before...
how much you hate to.
Walt
Axilea
Be always safe,
Karen
Cheers,
Dan