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A Deal's A Deal...
by Susan Bergeron → (All Poetry by Susan Bergeron)
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He was twelve and all boy

Dressed in his hockey gear

Waiting for the game

To start.

He looked up at me

And said

“Do I get a lobster if I score?”

Hedging my bet a bit

I said

“No, that requires

a hat trick.”

Three goals.

 

After the game

We took him out to eat

And I will never forget

The look on his face

When the waitress

Sat his plate

In front of him

And he came face to face

with two lobsters.

After all,

A Deal’s a deal.

 

Susan Bergeron

February 8, 2011

 


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 Reviews of "A Deal's A Deal..."
Reviewed by Katharine Sparrow
Reviewed on July 13, 2011
Awww, what a sweet poetic story! You paint a vivid image here, I an see the boy just staring at those lobsters! Well done.

Reviewed by Richard King
Reviewed on February 9, 2011
I like this one a lot, Susan. Well done "Mom." Thanks Dick

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on February 9, 2011
Nice one, Susan,
positive re-enforcement and nurturing.

John

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
Reviewed on February 8, 2011
Boy, weren't those the days.....I wonder what he'd say if he could see us now....Like the poem, LOVE ther poet...

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on February 8, 2011
Memories of great times! cute poem~


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