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Prisoner of the Mind
by Susan Bergeron → (All Poetry by Susan Bergeron)
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While watching the documentary

On the state school

And it’s closing in the mid 60’s

I had such a cold chill

And soggy eyes.

 

Memories of when my

Parents would tell me

They would send me

There if I didn’t obey….

 

I guess I wasn’t that

Bad because they

Didn’t send me

But in my child’s

Mind, a home

Can be as much

Of a prison as

A state school.

 

I should be thankful

But the feelings still

Leak down my cheeks.

 

Susan Bergeron

May 4, 2011


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 Reviews of "Prisoner of the Mind"
Reviewed by Richard King
Reviewed on May 9, 2011
Susan, you know I'm a big fan of your work, but this poem speaks of a much bigger story, which I sense you have yet to write. If my take is even close, I believe you’d be doing yourself a favor to take the time to write it, even if you never share it. But then, who am I to say.

Thanks for all you’ve offered in all your postings. I just love your work.

Dick

Reviewed on May 9, 2011
If parents only realize how words can wound. Well penned.

Reviewed on May 6, 2011
Hi Susan, the last verse wraps around it very nicely...the tears say it all. Makes the reader want more.... =) Thank you for sharing...

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on May 5, 2011
What a poignant write this is, Susan.
Incredible despair accompanies the feelings of abandonment for a child.
Blessings,
Christine


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