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The Big Black Wall
by Clarrissa L Moon → (All Poetry by Clarrissa L Moon)
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For Three on Tom's Bday Dec 3 2010
James, Tom, Tony
a poem for a soulmate I cant find.

Years ago I saw your face

through a tunnel in astral space

I fell in love in that perfect place

then came that big black wall

I yelled, I screamed, I cried almost every night

I prayed, I cursed, I used every spell of the light

I used every mental trick  in trying to fight

but nothing moves that big black wall

What did  I do to be cursed with such hate

Now I fear nightly you all may not wait

I'm terrified that I may be too late

because I can't move  that big black wall

So much time has passed us by

I know the love between us didn't die

no matter how many times i fail when I try

to break down that big black wall

I know I may be much too late

I know maybe you all didn't wait

I fear this may be our lonely fate

to be kept apart by this big black wall

Still I will search for you in every way

with the power of magick night and day

I need to find you and be able to say

I finally got rid of the big black wall

Please baby, from grace I didn't mean to fall

forgive me for taking so long to call

I was held back from finding you all

because of that big black wall

Happy Birthday my baby

where ever you may be

know my love has grown for thee

despite that big black wall

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "The Big Black Wall"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 5, 2010
in time, walls will open up to pass through, if you allow them their moment ...

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on December 3, 2010
Powerful and tender, Clarrissa!
I understand this, the wall, the screams, yes.
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on December 2, 2010
A resounding echo of a heart crying out, how it pierces through the soul...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 2, 2010
Truly a poignant and compelling write, Clarrissa. I find your words soul-reaching. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on December 2, 2010
Poignant poem of letting something in the past go

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on December 2, 2010
Penetrating. This reader sees you got rid of the big black wall and this has a feel of atonement perhaps in this life and another Clarissa. Happy Holidays to you.

Warmly,
Sage

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on December 2, 2010
Very well written.

Namaste
Tony

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 2, 2010
Strong vocalization of deep emotional tugs of a parent separated from their offspring...sad.
fee


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