AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  William Cottringer, iElla Rydzewski, iLalita Vasu, iMyra Darwish, iChristina Neely, iFrank Whyte, iEva Pasco, iMaryAngela Nangini PhD, iRaven West, iH.G. Potter, i

  Home > Poetry > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Alan Abrams

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Articles
· Poetry
· Stories
· 89 Titles
· 194 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Sep, 2010

Alan Abrams, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.



The Careless Perfection Of Nature
by Alan Abrams → (All Poetry by Alan Abrams)
Wednesday, April 28, 2021    Rated "PG" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook

Foolish oaks and impassive stone


Poem Artwork

Damn fool oaks!
Don’t they know that lightning seeks the tallest trunks?
And what about those prissy hemlocks,

so neat and frilly, so fussy in their form--
Now ravaged by some hungry little bug.
Whole forests of them, denuded.
Even monstrous boulders, silent and impassive-- 

the ones outlasting mountains,
surrender to shape-shifting waters, 
and slender roots seeking the merest fissure.
Great stones, winding up like the dwindling sands 
trickling through my glass.
When that glass gets turned again, 
I promise to keep closer to the earth.
To be, perhaps, a blushing trillium. 
White or pink, it makes no difference.
Just give me a night of icy rain, 
a few warm days of dappled sun--
--Then, I will show you my perfection.

 

 


Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "The Careless Perfection Of Nature"
Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on April 30, 2021
Trillium: such a powerful metaphor.
Indeed, water is such an amazing and unique liquid,
So much, so very much to admire here.

Reviewed by Alan Abrams
Reviewed on April 29, 2021
thank you Ronald and Diana <3

Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on April 29, 2021
Those last three lines really do it for me...Perfect!

Diana...

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 29, 2021
Yes, the universe shows us that it takes a lot of violence and upheaval before the beauty comes through.

You brought back memories of my childhood when we would enter the dark forest in the springtime to find the spaces between the trees filled with white trillium. As ignorant children we picked them and brought them back to our grandmother for an arrangement.

But trillium have have but three petals and three seeds. Soon after early childhood, I learned that it was illegal to pick trillium because they had to recover every year from one of those three seeds. Indicating the narrow, delicate balance that nature has sometimes to overcome to continue a species.

Ron


New Poetry by Alan Abrams
Popular Poetry (Poetry)
  1.  Catching Happiness...
  2.  Finding Trust Again
  3.  Nightsky
  4.  Reality of Another Kind
  5.  Spindrift
  6.  Kindness
  7.  Our Restless Minds
  8.  Luxury of Solitude
  9.  In The Still of The Night
  10.  Dream Just a Dream
  11.  Life's Enormous Green Chest
  12.  Sediment Within the Soul
  13.  Roadkill Memoriam
  14.  Hunting for Truth
  15.  Whisper Pens
  16.  In Praise of Anonymity
  17.  I Have Spent My Entire Life
  18.  Shaved Reflections
  19.  Feeling Lonely
  20.  Serrated Smiles
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

Kind A SLOw In The Kootenays v2.2 by RickthePoetWarrior

Has-beens and coffee get together to recreate a same old new tourist trap in a land even the First Nations don't want.  
Member BookAds

Next Arrivals by Robin Ouzman Hislop

Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,  
Member BookAds

Norwood Night And Other Poems by David Clure

After the sun descends...and Norwood night sinks in, reality can be seen from a whole new perspective!  
Member BookAds