Whispering lyrics (poem) by Zenith Elliott on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 23, 2008

This is beautiful as I am sure you are beautiful inside your soul.

Amen!

Reviewed on September 8, 2005

Hypnotic and mesmerizing. Tell it, Sister, tell it! 'Pea' <3

{N: Hope you don't mind my calling you Sister; I am not one to
pay attention to what I consider to be artificial barriers. Peace,
Phyllis)

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed

Reviewed on September 3, 2005

Your words: "Listening ears, deafened with pride, knowing everything, yet nothing is right, walk in the wind, excuses denied."

You just predicted the attitudes of Washington D.C. before Hurricane Katrina even hit the coast. Who says that poets shouldn't be heard on the White House Lawn? Oh yeah, George told Laura not to entertain nuts like us, twice in row, didn't he now?

blessin's Sistah,
cynth'ya lewis reed

Reviewed by Huda Orfali

Reviewed on September 3, 2005

wonderful song
stunning poetry
great imagery
well done

Reviewed by Sandi Schraut

Reviewed on August 29, 2005

wow sensual and moving!! the spacing of the lines is perfect for the mood of the words! Sandi

Reviewed by Phyllis Du'Gas (Reader)

Reviewed on August 25, 2005

ABSOLUTELY PROLIFIC! I needed to read this today! I love your style. Keep writing my Sistah! You are a blessing! Phyllis

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on August 21, 2005

Wow MizzLadyP-You have a way with words.
It's no mystery-
YOur feelings you do not lack
The lines that repeat could go
In a Spiritual song.
I enjoyed this completely-
Thank you for sharing this
Special piece.
I felt like I was climbing up
Heavens sTarcase- WArmly-Sweet Sheee P.S. YOu touched my Soul-
~Plant a SEED and Watch it GroWww~ and...it will you know.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 20, 2005

You create a compelling ambiance with your verses. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace.

Regis

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on August 16, 2005

Very impressive and well done piece of poetical literature. I wam most impressed by the repetitiousness of those lines which began with "Touch my soul," etc. Good.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 15, 2005

a wonderful, pensive poem ...

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Reviewed on August 15, 2005

This was so soothing and light, peaceful- you really got the mood across with delicate word choices.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 14, 2005

Wow girl this is awesome!!

Perfection!!

And the space between the lines even makes you float to the next...very quietly....like a bird just hanging there before moving his wings before the next dive to another level!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on August 14, 2005

Very nice. This touches the soul.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on August 14, 2005

Absolutely lovely, this is so beautiful and peaceful, enjoyed this very much,

Reindeer

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 14, 2005

Z~ this is a beautifully constructed poem to share for uplifting
the spirit! Thank you!

Eileen

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 14, 2005

Eagles soar peace-filled so free
they know the answers
whispered, that we seek.

I think they truly do, and I love this poem, Mizzlady.