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The Setting Sun, in the style of a sonnet.
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This sonnet style exercise is direct result of some remarkably accurate and astute observations by richard cederberg on a recent posting of mine. Despite I being an early member of Authorsden. I have not posted here for a good number of years, and to that effect, I presume that with a few exceptions that I am totally unknown to current members.


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There comes a time in each man’s life:
 when, cavil sees a contest.
It whispers a forsaken strife,
and minds last avant-garde of protest.

No more vain glories, vied, or sought
in wildness of adventure.
Its challenge, of lives, amorous mort.
Self-delving into real times danger.

Eld’s onward rush its effort earned,
 its foison slowly fading.
Our étourderie shows little learned:
in hastes of yester ways, and yearning.

Tide’s time displays, in auric sands:
Life’s setting sun. Man understands

. Mor.  

 


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 Reviews of "The Setting Sun, in the style of a sonnet."
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 3, 2012
Your sonnet is on a high level of literary expression. Thank you for sharing your gift, Mor. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on October 28, 2012
Your literary voice, your choice of words, and phraseology, are certainly your own poet. And you are one of very few that I am obliged to seek a dictionary with. Your criticism of one of my sentences encouraged me to change it. An interesting piece here, Mor. Peace and continued inspiration ... richard

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 27, 2012
Yes, I have noticed that some of our members approaching the end of their lives tend to write a great deal about that plight. I am tempted, but not quite ready to reach that point as I write my autobiography of adventures of my youth that I can no longer partake. I do not look at them with sadness, but look forward to what I can accomplish in a few short years I have left.

Ron

Reviewed by Stephen Cherring
Reviewed on October 27, 2012
This is a complicated write for me a 'non academic' But the fact that its held me here for more than ten minutes is I must think..what makes it an interesting challenging to unravel. I mean this as a compliment.
I'm gonna' get to the bottom of it before long. I never give up.

Brilliant.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 26, 2012
as far as i can see, your mind hasn't left ...


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