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Oremus
by Mor o' Inchrory → (All Poetry by Mor o' Inchrory)
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This poem started out intending to be about Obama’s walkabout in the Middle East, and then quickly died a death; it seems, somewhat similar to his much-broadcast initiatives.

So returning to poetry, I thought there was not much difference there either.

One-half of the English-speaking world seems to have great difficulty understanding what the other half is talking about most of the time.

So, I got to think about an extremely stimulating conversation I had with Mike Burch of “The HyperTexts” about the authoritarian accuracy of today’s free verse poets, whereby he expressed the view that technical correctness in poetry was not overly important.

Such, mistakes being part and parcel of poetry’s history.

Which, I have to agree is perfectly true , even the very best have been guilty of such a trifling mumpsimus.

My objection, however, is centred on a current well-known poetry editor who persistently salts his prose poetry with technical terms; which it seems he has not the least idea what they mean.

They seemed to be chosen more for their aesthetic appeal than any accuracy.

Which to my amazement they then goes on to win prizes, or at least are judged by his peers as being excellent, when it is obvious that they too are oblivious to the errors, yet those same people will descend like the banshees of Hell, at the sight of a misplaced comma?

Apparently such inclusions now being adjudged as an essential element of free verse, you notice how the French were very careful to classify it as verse, and not poetry.

It is strange how modern poets never noticed the subtle distinction.

 Needless, to say, I give them plenty to rave about. As the following lines, will undoubtedly show.

Moreover, as usual, there will be those who understand it, and those who do not have clue what I am prattling on about .

However, that is life. You can seldom please one without upsetting another.

This leaves one with the sad conclusion that one might just as well please one’s self and let the rest go to hell, or somewhere just as congenial that meets their need.

I did not come in this world to spend my time in a poetry boot camp licking arses, not when there some very nice arses available elsewhere.

                                               “Oremus”

There’re those who cast more than their doubt.
On those self-versers of: orate fratres.
Those mumbled words they loathe to shout.
soon dissipate in aesthesis of dead verses.

For there are those who are inclined to say,
what poets write, must be in vers libre.
It matters not what sense it seeks array
It’s only there for best part of one’s cliche.

 They’re but fruit flies! I almost hear wit say,
enjoying, their short moments of display.

No more, a genre, one recites at length
Or cherish those that gave art its great strength.
To stay in tribute to- man’s better mind.
What chance we now such cherished gems to find.

Whilst oysters are subject to our forage
pearls lie in matrix of their lustred form
where gifted aragonites of our language
reveal a beauty their lone words perform. .

Where, all is now paste, such gem’s subterfuge
like jumbled Lego blocks of sad writ compense.
The lurid ruse of plastic poetry’s fake rouge;
Speak ill to those whose wish be of finesse
and poets’ words they can, bring back at will.


Where free verse is, but worded mind's unrest
pretty words picked for reasons it’s outguessed.
To lie in fragmentation's own kaleidoscope;
and give glass view, of poetics abandoned hope.

But yet, one can still hear the Bow bells of that distant time.
When ingenuity gave the listener, its reasons rhyme.


For as the joiner said -to his unkenned
a more than often, lonely coffin maker.
One can easily lay bricks, set end to end
it’s the buttering that shows who is the faker.

To, leave poor prose no word to hand,
a course without means of its closure.
Or raise its protest high upon its stand.
And there debate such quasi-wrongs exposure.

Mor.  

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Oremus"
Reviewed by Robert Whitford
Reviewed on August 16, 2013
I myself never started as a technical poet Mor, so I wasn't originally weighted down with preconceived ideas of what is the best way to write some verse or another. I sense that you weren't either. What works is what works. No recipe for what works or not. So I'm comfortable in whatever style works the best for me at the time. I write to my own taste. If someone likes that, fine. I think most of us here know what we like and what works best. Never be afraid to try something different or do the same type of writing you're comfortable in. If it's good someone will tell you so. Words are what we deal in and the style is periphery to the power of the words. Who cares what some esoteric little pod of lotus eaters think of your work? I like your work a lot myself. Bob

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 25, 2013
Your complaint is heard and understood.

There are two camps in this fast-paced world. The slam poets who like to get out in the streets and rant loud and fast like hip-hop artists, slipping in the gutter talk and personal vendettas along with their cool renditions.

And then there are those in those rare circles of personal indulgence who, through some self-appointed hierarchy, draft incoherent prose in an effort to impress small circle of like-minded esoteric fools, thinking they are inventing a whole new genre by violating any rules of poetry or punctuation in their quest for recognition. Prizes or not, most of that poetry faded into oblivion quickly.

It's only the poem that stirs passion in the heart, or makes a point so well that it informs and enlightens, using time-honored lyrical and metrical enhancement that can truly be called, great poetry. And even that must stand the test of time.

Ron

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 25, 2013
How well you have expressed the thoughts of some and how you look upon the daily prattle of those who in themselves have high esteem.

George


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