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What have you done?
by Audrey C → (All Poetry by Audrey C)
Wednesday, March 2, 2016    Rated "PG" by the Author.
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A life of grief following death of a loved one by drugs

What you have done?

 

Sadness sits in your chair

Dressed in black not blue

I cannot eat my dinner

I just think of you

 

Anger walks along the paths

We used to walk together

In summer and in winter

In all kinds of weather

 

Guilt, my new companion

Is in my room at night

When I want to go to sleep

Keeps switching on a light

 

Why did you make me grieve?

Why from my life did walk?

Drugs made you so different

Another voice would talk

 

Your place cannot be filled

In the end - you could not care

Now you are gone forever

In your room I stand and stare

 

An empty pullover, shoes, socks

Books strewn upon your table

I must do something with them

I will - when I am able

 

Drugs your life has taken

What now - the future years?

Love, hope and dreams - all gone

To a land of inner tears

A Coatesworth ( Retired Consultant Psychiatrist)



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 Reviews of "What have you done?"
Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on March 4, 2016
deeply emotional and powerful

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 2, 2016
As a psychiatrist, it must have been doubly devastating, because you are supposed to be able to help people, and even use drugs to help them get over disorders.

Throughout my life, although thankfully, not people who were very close to me, like family, I've known people who destroyed their lives with drugs. It's a real shame that society has created these drugs, often for pleasure, only to be faced with their terrible downside. It seems like that those people that I've known who have died from drugs, were also of superior intelligence and their contributions to our world stopped with excessive use of drugs and their debilitating effect.

All I can say is, what a waste and what a waste of emotions caused by those around them.

Ron

Reviewed by Dadfire
Reviewed on March 2, 2016
Audrey, great expression of what we all feel when we lose someone close. When my little brother died of a drug overdose years ago, I kept a favorite shirt of his hanging in my closet and would hold it close to my mouth and nose often. The shirt still had remnant of his smell and helpled or hurt me in the grieving for a long time,not sure which.
Dan

Reviewed on March 2, 2016
Heart stabbing grief!!! Oh, that you would not suffer so. Bad choices, not you, are to blame. Bless you!!!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on March 2, 2016
Very touching.

Michael D.

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on March 2, 2016
Grief has no time limit.
Powerful and oh so devastatingly sad, especially for those left, left lonely and bereft of their loved ones life.


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