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An aspect of war.
by Audrey C → (All Poetry by Audrey C)
Tuesday, April 11, 2017    Rated "PG" by the Author.
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An aspect of war, particularly relating to children

 

 

The world's heart breaks

Each day, a little more

As tiny, helpless children

Are rescued from death's door

Bombs fall as toxic rain

From unknown, unseen planes

So terror rules with endless pain

And evil's captains reign

 

But, I ask this one question-

In a war that lasts for years

With destruction and hunger

Nothing left but total fears

Why are there any children

Born into this dreadful state?

Men, to satisfy their carnal lust

Do these innocents create

 

A father is meant to protect

To nurture, and to love

Any child he has caused to be

His gift, from God above

If this is impossible to achieve

Then a father he should not be

Loving a future child enough

To leave it safe at God's right knee

 

A father’s tears are meaningless

When the grief has been

Caused through his carnal lust

Despite the wartime scene

Paternal love or religious beliefs

However strong or mild

Now play no part in stopping

The suffering of his child

Copyright Audrey Coatesworth 2017


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 Reviews of "An aspect of war."
Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on April 12, 2017
Heartfelt emotion here that Sears the soul in reflection...
War achieves nothing...but death and heartache...and the children are its
saddest casualties...
Well written piece...


Reviewed on April 11, 2017
Oh! You stabbed my soul, girl!! Emotion explode!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on April 11, 2017
"War! Good gawd, what is it good for? Absolutely nothin'.--Edwin Starr

https://youtu.be/dpWmlRNfLck


Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 11, 2017
A point well taken. The war has gone on for seven years. Any child under six was born during these perilous times. Unfortunately, birth control is still looked down upon and large families are lauded by some people on this earth. And, during the time of war, stress may result in more pregnancies than lust. Finally, there is always the idea that with so many dead it's a good thing to replenish the population with youngsters. Those under genocide for their hated ways may promote large fame to offset so many killed.

As a counterpoint, many towns were relatively safe up to a point and family life went on. However, the tides of this war changed often and people in whole towns became trapped if they hadn't already fled as refugees like so many already have. With the men fighting, many women and children stayed behind in the safest part of town (they thought).

Finally, I think that we view our technology of war as superior with our "surgical strikes" and eyes on the target so that we "minimize collateral damage." It is really a coward's way of looking at things when we use technology to do our dirty business of bloodletting. The most heinous of all are all the countries building nuclear arsenals in the name of defense. If used in offense, like other weapons of mass destruction, civilians and children will most likely bear the brunt of "hands-off" war.

Ron


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