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Hell
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raindrops are falling,
hear my love calling,
teardrops are falling as well,
my heart is aching,
my heart is breaking,
feels like I'm heading for hell!

why did you leave me,
why did you grieve me,
why did you leave just this shell,
where have you gone to,
making me feel blue,
making my life into hell.

where did our love go,
I still love you so,
I loved you moret than I could tell,
my heart is now broken,
my tears are me choking,
life cannott be much worse in hell!

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 Reviews of "Hell"
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on July 17, 2004
Love Is a MYTH,Hell Is REAL Is Only Your Beginning,i.e. True Love Is Compassion Seek It Will Find You!

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TRASK

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on July 17, 2004
Ah, pains of loss love do hurt so very much! Well done!

Reviewed on July 16, 2004
Ah, excellently expressed, just fits my mood this evening, liked this very much,

Reindeer

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on July 16, 2004
excellently expressive piece on this at times most troubling of mysteries...love.


Allen

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 16, 2004
Love can do that to ya', but we all seem to muddle onward...life is hell but can most tell? Peace, Ed & rufuz


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