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Movements II (sentient gradations of these colours, unreadable)
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With unutterable thanks to sentient readers… xoxoxox

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Movements II
(sentient gradations of these colours, unreadable)

 

I

We are close, you see; like feet, bare, to mossy flagstones
on the way to the same open-ended advent -
and my hair and their whirl are interchangeable in the wind.

II

And there is, about us, this intimate penetrability;
as if their secrets were my lair, and their hollowed
moistness, dark and downy, like a retreat enclosed
in ferns, were my own (and their) confession;

So, we mate, with all the unchaste purity of being
natural ; and at once ground and conception, we birth
ourselves – multiplied breathing creatures that spill out
and scamper away.

III

We may be tasted (if not reached)and then be deemed sour;
yet, left in the blaze of the same wait, we’ll swell, well up
in one another, until the sweetness of being ready
weighs us down -

To then simply fall, consummated, with a plop
like a sigh, upon the tongue of one same hunger
whose teeth will then crush us, to quench one same thirst.

IV

Ah... and yes, there are days when they’ll turn eclectic
like too many longings scattered by fingers much too eager;

And they, and I, will not crystallize as more than smears
of these colours, unreadable -

But sentient, yes, if you take my fingers to your lips
and lustfully, leisurely, suck them, the gradations, one by one…

 

-- © 2008 Alexandra* ~ OneLight*®

 

 


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Reviewed on September 29, 2008
Oh my, I could see the colors!!

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on September 29, 2008
I think I am with Jerry below here Alexandra.
This is a masterclass of a sentient and sensuous write that tickles and delights the empirical and cellerbrum senses.

Love and Peace

Peter

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2008
But sentient, yes, if you take my fingers to your lips
and lustfully, leisurely, suck them, the gradations, one by one…

( aaaaaaah the scorpio in you ..)



sigh..what can one say?..Perfection!

Blessings,

vesna

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2008
I suppose I could say without contradiction that this is one of the finest, most poetic and lustful poem of lust turning to love I have ever read . . . This is MY take on it, whether you meant it that way or not . . . It is so earthy I can almost smell the moist, freshly plowed ground, used as a metaphor, as I read this superb piece, Alexandria (One of my all-time favorite pieces of literature is "The Alexandria Quartet"). You give the reader a way to lose himself in the words . . . Taste the sourness and savor the sweetness of all he senses as he fantasizes while the words keep him captivated . . .


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