AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Pamela Wiedenbeck, iMartin Treon, iM. R. Mathias, iBob Brink, iShirley Woods, iChristina Neely, iT. Cline, iShirley Francis-Salley, iMORGAN ST. JAMES, iTrennis Killian, i

  Home > Poetry > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Jennifer Jurado

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Poetry
· 79 Titles
· 180 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Jul, 2003

Jennifer Jurado, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.



brown eyes
by Jennifer Jurado → (All Poetry by Jennifer Jurado)
  
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook

can you see my soul through my eyes?


Poem Artwork


saw i last night, a moonlight that's never been before;
bright in darkness against a spotless white night sky,
specs of brown stardust dance sweetly about,
hypnotizing, an dpulling my eyes to gaze so frozenly.
it seemed to do nothing but float.
that which sees me as a child,
forms a perfected shape of a golden almond;
that which looks at me with such lustful intentions,
shines liek the morning, yet hide so much as the night;
lids curve as the waves...opening slowly to reveal such wonder;
questions like the sea...
so deep...so endless...so passionate...so powerful.
sustained as the clouds are in the heaven.


saw him last night, sunshine that's setting away;
as he looked in my eyes...clearly deformed in every way.
with tears that blur that shining deep brown,
wide, and full of questions and doubts.
lashes that seem to fall out envelope its shape,
curves are no longer...but straight and lifeless.
its whiteness but a valley for red streams to flow,
corners sharp as knives, it killed him to look.


that which stares at utter beauty cries for perfection;
tears ablaze as if 'twas gasoline.
such fire in his eyes burned hers with such affection,
that it did dry the tears that filled her dying soul.


Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "brown eyes"
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on July 11, 2003
I loved this one.
PJ

Reviewed by Brittany Renée
Reviewed on July 11, 2003
That's pretty weird looking that photo! It's actually very intriguing to have a look at though.

As for your poem, it's very detailed and imaginative!

=-br-=


New Poetry by Jennifer Jurado
Popular Poetry (Poetry)
  1.  Catching Happiness...
  2.  Finding Trust Again
  3.  Nightsky
  4.  Reality of Another Kind
  5.  Spindrift
  6.  Kindness
  7.  Our Restless Minds
  8.  Luxury of Solitude
  9.  In The Still of The Night
  10.  Dream Just a Dream
  11.  Life's Enormous Green Chest
  12.  Sediment Within the Soul
  13.  Roadkill Memoriam
  14.  Hunting for Truth
  15.  Whisper Pens
  16.  In Praise of Anonymity
  17.  I Have Spent My Entire Life
  18.  Shaved Reflections
  19.  Feeling Lonely
  20.  Serrated Smiles
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

Flights of Fancy Volume 1 by Dawn Huffaker

A collection of poems that show my unique outlook and style.  
Member BookAds

Beat Writings & Ramblings by William haynes

beat poetry like Corso, Ginsberg and Kerouac  
Member BookAds

And The Parade Went By by David Clure

Over Thirty David CLURE Poems Penned During The Great Pandemic Pause of 2020; Many Never Before Read Poems...  
Member BookAds