i remember the sights, the lights that hardly were ever there the slow rain pouring, slowly overflowing empty potholes on that street where i used to run and get chased i remember the honk of jeepneys the buzz of flies on chicken intestines roasted to perfection on the sidewalks sold with a cup of coke for less than you can ever imagine then there was that dusty air i was used to thought the air in America was much too clean, i'd choke on it and never get the chance to go back to the hungry children, naked impoverished, grinning like it was nothing smiling as if they understood it all the meaning of life, even mine.
and they did. only they couldn't speak for they knew no words i could understand
Well expressed write...I respect your spillage of the truth....BHUWAN
Reviewed by DJ Gregorio (Reader)
Reviewed on October 30, 2003
Maybe they couldnt speak because they became breathless for that second. Or maybe they were blinded by your beauty? Just as I was when I first saw you. =)
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
a strking evocation
of a reality not known in n.america north of thr rio grande
and a question that speaks to us here
john+
Keep writing, Poet. You got the veins filled with truth.
Most Respectfully.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU