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moving haiku
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How I feel today after spending the entire week between packing up our old houseparent apartment, moving it to the new one to unpack, then cleaning the old one (we vacuumed, shampooed, scrubbed walls, windows, dusted, you name it we cleaned it) all during the hours of 8:30 - 2:30 each day since we have 10 middle school boys around the rest of the day. This is what I came up with:

extreme exhaustion
pack then unpack, clean the house
move almost complete


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 Reviews of "moving haiku"
Reviewed on September 27, 2004
Katryn,

Wonderful and so original - loved it!!

Robert

Reviewed by Katryn Dougherty
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
If I begin at birth:
Born in Hanover, Mass; moved to Cherry Point, NC; Moved to Hamburg, NY; moved to a different house while there; and yet again move to a different house while still in Hamburg NY area (all these moves are before age 5); as an adult...moved to Greeley, CO; move back to Hamburg, NY; Moved back to Cherry Point; then off to Phoenix, AZ; then here to Hershey PA into a Housparent training apartment; then into our furst student home; and now here. Phew...so how many moves is that? Hopefully I am done for a while.

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on September 17, 2004
I am about to move again in a few months, and am NOT
looking forward to it! You expressed your exhaustion
very well! Believe me, I do understand!
Excellent poem!
Becca

Reviewed on September 17, 2004
i don't like moving either. yick! good haiku though; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :)

have moved three times in my life: once when i was five, in 1999, when i came to texas, and four years ago, when we moved to an apt. just up the complex. we needed a bigger place.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on September 16, 2004
The haiku expresses the situation so well

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 16, 2004
Great expression of the energy needed. Great write.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on September 16, 2004
I hate moving. Good luck.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on September 16, 2004
Yep! that sum it up
loved it

William ....Peace

Reviewed by Veronica Hosking
Reviewed on September 16, 2004
Poor thing. Why I will NEVER move again.


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