THE START... (poem) by Asa D. Seeley on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 7, 2012

They did not take your life so there is always hope. Very deep and insightful.

Reviewed on August 10, 2012

Poignant, powerful.. and full of Promise!
Well done, Asa!
You are added to my daily prayers for deliverance.

But until then, the LORD is with you.. right where you are. :)

May GOD abundantly bless your wonderful mother!

Love in Christ, Rhonda

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on July 6, 2012

Asa,
Beautiful and heartfelt verses. God bless.

Many blessings,
+Linda

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on April 15, 2012

BEING IN A POSITION OF HARD OPPRESSION AND DEEP DEPRESSION...CAN BE A NEW BEGINNING, BUT ONLY IF WE LOOK TO GOD FOR THE STRENGTH TO MAKE IT THROUGH. THANKS FOR SHARING THIS SO INSPIRING WORK. GOD BLESS YOU, SON. LOVE AND MUCH PEACE. JOYCE*HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer

Reviewed on March 23, 2012

A wonderful space and place to feel Dear Asa ~ Eternity..... thank you for sharing a piece of it with us.... out of hardship comes the most divine things!! Thank you again for sharing xoxox :-)

Reviewed by Ruan Mills

Reviewed on March 20, 2012

These powerful words take your reader far into the unknown and challenge them to see something new, feel something alien to them and acknowledge those feelings.

Reviewed by Michael Jones

Reviewed on March 19, 2012

Peace and eternity are brothers and sisters. Now you must conquer the universe since you know the antidote! Beautiful poem heavenly inspired, thanks for sharing love and your insight. Peace!!!

Reviewed by Denise Nowakowski

Reviewed on March 19, 2012

ASA - a very poignant verse. Makes one think, makes one feel. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes, Denise

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)

Reviewed on March 13, 2012

I agree with Annabel Sheila: "This is as inspirational as it gets!"

Reviewed by PENNY CALLAHAN (Reader)

Reviewed on March 1, 2011

The Divine Comforter .The avenue to the comforting of the divine comforter lies through the need of comfort.And this explain to me better than anything else the reason why the LORD so often allows sorrow and trail to be our portion."Therefore, behold, I will allure her, and bring her into the wilderness, and comfortably unto her ( HOSEA 2:14) but he knows that it is only in that very wilderness that we can here and receive the "Comfortable words" He has to pour out upon us.from the book GOD OF ALL COMFORT.HOW WONDERFUL TO SEE AND FEEL GOD AS THE RESLUT OF BEING WHERE YOU ARE IN LIFE THE WORDS OF THE BOOK THE GOD OF ALL COMFORT EXPRESS WHAT I WOULD HAVE SAID. IT IS THRU OUR SUFFERING THAT WE SEE GOD. FOR HE IS BLESSED AMONG MEN.

Reviewed by Janna Hill

Reviewed on February 24, 2011

Heart felt. Heaven seen from the depths of hell.... Fret not about the climb Asa for God will lift you up.

Reviewed by Ann Marquette

Reviewed on February 24, 2011

Wow! brilliant and very profound.

Reviewed by Stephanie Webb

Reviewed on February 21, 2011

This poem touches hearts. Beautiful Poem!

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on February 17, 2011

Asa has his mother's love of God.

Reviewed by Daniel Keith

Reviewed on February 13, 2011

Asa has really got the gift of writing. His love for the Lord speaks in his writing. May God bless you every day of your life.

Daniel

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on February 5, 2011

How utterly profound! WOW ! It touches the inner recesses of one soul ! A great write by Asa .. Thanks for sharing this gem with us....M

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on February 2, 2011

Excellent work. Your son is very talented indeed.

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on January 31, 2011

Absolutely stunning work and the picture is breathtaking!!! This is as inspirational as it gets! Keep up the fabulous work, Asa! I'm keeping this one....

Blessings,
Anna

Reviewed by Diana Wiles

Reviewed on January 29, 2011

So profundly moving...A great future of writing beckons...
Peace, Diana...

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on January 29, 2011

EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!! VERY TALENTED!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on January 28, 2011

written from the gut.~ Morgan

Reviewed by Margaret Mullings

Reviewed on January 28, 2011

Heart rendering and deeply moving one to reach out to Abba Father's outstretched hand to receive His divine rescue!
"Nothing else matters...
no man...no woman
Knows...until they know "
Impacting me deep with in! Asa, may your loving Heavenly Father sustain, strengthen, and keep you focused! Giving to you endurance and bring you victoriously through! He is a keeper, and a restorer! Yes He will restore all that has been stolen or lost! Continue to hold on the darkest hour is just before the dawn! Joyce, thank you so much for sharing and for caring.....you are my earth angel! Be encouraged!

Much Love,
Margaret

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on January 28, 2011

Joyce,
Asa expresses his depth here, depth of soul and longing for
that which is much greater than we have or know.
Tell him from me how good this is, and please give us more.

John

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on January 28, 2011

This descends into profound grief, and emerges full of compassion.
Beautifully written ~
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on January 28, 2011

Asa, digs deep from within, as I can feel his emotions..fine work!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 28, 2011

Truly a tought-inciting poem, Joyce... ...it reveals Asa's reflective and meaningful process. Thank you for sharing. Love and blessings to you both of you,

Regis

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on January 28, 2011

Hi Joyce it is great to read you again Dear Friend. Asa writing is filled with passion of a righteous life. And is was expertly crafted.

GOD BLESS YOU BOTH
TONY

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante

Reviewed on January 28, 2011

your son is a deep thinker and a fine poet as well.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on January 28, 2011

An excellent write by Asa, Joyce. Very well done.