I like this poetry! I read it aloud (don't do that often) and it flowed all the way through. Some very deep thought going on here and your choice of words really drew me in.
Dear readers, this is my third book of poems, and inside are a special collection of what have turned out to be not only MY personal favorites, but also the favorites of many of YOU. Some of these have never been available in print before...
Sherry
I am extending an invitation to you to come see my webpages dedicated to the victims of genocide in Darfur, Western Sudan.
http://www.voicesforAfrica.homestead.com/index.html
Thanks,
Jim Dunlap
'A heart gets broken to never mend
no strength, no courage to even pretend.
Onward we travel to futures unsure
burning thoughts of a love once pure. "
Lady Peg
Nice piece.
-James