I like how you ended the poem with the same lines as you started, almost as if the poem would start up again. But I think you should correct the spelling error in the title. Do you mean "The Cycle of Life"?
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
~Nikki~
Julie :)
This is very well done. The return to the beginning serves your theme splendidly, and it is simple, as are life's cycles.
Vicky
Best regards,
Leland