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Closure
by Carolyn R. Dye → (All Poetry by Carolyn R. Dye)
Rated "G" by the Author.

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A poem I wrote after I broke up with a person I thought I would spend the rest of my life with.
Things we do in life we may fall short at times. Somewhere along the line we try and make them right. I put my world on hold so you could decide what you wanted. Didn't work out that last go round. I now need something from youthat you're to selfish to give. Closure is what I seek. Everything I did wrong I tryed to make right yet you never let me live it down. Your hatered made me lose my sanity. Closure would put an end to your hurt so you could continue to enjoy your freedom and chase skirts. Closure can let me open my heart again to know what true and unconditional love really is. Closure would put this all to rest, this whole ugly game playing mess. Closure is what we both deserve. Closure for you and me so we can move on and just be. Closure to totally move on part on good terms.

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)

Reviewed on September 7, 2012

This request is full of the words of a forgiving voice, in the line "would put an end to your hurt..." A voice that speaks these words surely belongs to someone with a grande conscience, a worthy soul, speaking for wellness. Good intentions written in here. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley

Oh Carolyn, closure is walking away
no running away from this man.
You deserve closure, I won't go into
what he deserves! He has obviously
never learned the meaning of love.
He is a young soul in this lifetime
you my dear are a loving more mature
soul.

Lean into me sweetheart and let me
put my arm around you. Then we will
stand in front of a mirror. I want
you to see you, a loving woman who
deserves so much more. Bury the past
with this man and stand tall. He
DOES NOT deserve you. Remember this.

Love and Light
Lily