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A MAN TEARDROPS
by Luella Dudley → (All Poetry by Luella Dudley)
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Motivational piece dedicated to the men

 Oh babe, the saddest eyes I ever seen

was a man tear drops rolling down his cheek

his tear drops melted my soul away

it weaken every part of my being

ooh a man tear drops is so powerful

it's like a thunder storm to the universe

A man tear drops is like the sound

of a hollow voice saying, "I lost it!"

ooooh! oh  a man teardrops is like breaking

every fiber of his being down to ground zero

 and robbing him of his true identity the oh mighty hero

oh babe, babe, a man tear drops is like declaring defeat

which that ain't his phsique, a man tear drops is like the earthquake 

to his soul, a man tear drops is his evidence

that he do have a heart

so, everybody rushed to your feet

and make sure his heart never stop

if his heart ever stop!!

A man tear drops, the wonderful, beautiful

gorgeous of man, handsome got to be included

of a man tear drops much power in your tears

a man tear drops don't never stop

because he has carried his pain

within for far to, to long

for someone made the mistake of making him believe

when he breakdown he is not strong

but oh babe let me tell you, 

they are wrong!!!!


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 Reviews of "A MAN TEARDROPS"
Reviewed by Asa Seeley
Reviewed on October 30, 2012
standing naked before the world...is the beginning of true manhood.
thanks for sharing. asa

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on October 21, 2012
Heck, when my son came close to death, I cried. My mother in-law said I'm not a man, as men are strong and never cry. As I was holding the one month old in my arms.
Not many women think like you!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 21, 2012
This sure is a new take on manhood! However, I can see where a woman would fall for a man who cries.

Ron

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on October 20, 2012
Beautiful, powerful, honest, understanding. You can write because you can feel. Well done, Luella.


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