as i watch the reconstruction the metal ball crashes into the old world crumbling and devouring making room for the view and i'm trying to recall the way that dream felt it's the end of something old and the beginning of something new
and she said that the year would be one of reflection but i see it's importance as so much more
it is the breaking away of the old foundation and the building of a great castle a mighty fortress that will never be destroyed by boxer shorts or bloody gloves
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Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on October 27, 2003
This is one to slowly peel back the layers and relish each part! Bravo!
~Nikki~
Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)
Reviewed on October 27, 2003
a dream with layers to peel back and examine...upon awakening
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~Nikki~
"and she said that the year
would be one of reflection
but i see it's importance
as so much more"
:)