Mom, This is intense and mysterious just like the storm I like it.
The chainsaw vibe and sound adds a great depth of perception.
Good work! Love and miss you & glad as is well. Talk to you soon love & light! Shell
I'm not sure how to comment on this. I fail to see the purpose or the statement that was made with a purpose on this poem, except in my mind I could hear the chainsaws.
Today is not one of my days for a concise critique. Perhaps I'm just not too bright today.
This book represents a thirty-day period of my poetry journal. Each poem addresses
the dominant thoughts occupying my mind during the early morning hours of a given
day.
Inspirational poetry, written from the heart and soul. Verses that are well-suited for reading on a rainy day and that are guaranteed to bring a smile to your face.
The chainsaw vibe and sound adds a great depth of perception.
Good work! Love and miss you & glad as is well. Talk to you soon love & light! Shell
Today is not one of my days for a concise critique. Perhaps I'm just not too bright today.
Sandie May Angel