Very discriptive and visual poem. Very well done. Indeed a bit different from most I have read. Personally, I would rate the poem. Thank you for sharing this, I enjoyed reading snd feeling it.
Yeeeeeeees.... I remeber it well..... and as I cool down, your words progress at about the same as all of that carrying on... Sweet and full of wonder and being loved completely. Good work.
Yes. I can totally relate, Rose. But this only happens with the right "other." Oooh. It's so true what you've shared here. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
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Lingering
Tingling
Aching
Yearning
To repeat
Lust torched
Unleashed passion
Once more" So beautiful,dear Rose!
Amen
Stay well and keep writing.
Ed
Bill
"Sexual Aching"
Perfectly penned indeed!
Splendid, construction, and execution/delivery!
Points well taken, loved it!
Continued love enlightenments to you,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm
Smiles!
What a way to meet? HA!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
enjoyable sensuous reading
thanks for sharing
Love & Peace
William
- Bill
Love Tinka
When wishes and dreams become reality, the memory becomes a painted masterpiece.
... Michael
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Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)