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Snow being piled up Night
by Choi Paul Yearn → (All Poetry by Choi Paul Yearn)
Friday, March 5, 2021    Rated "G" by the Author.
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In Korean poetry, there are many outstanding works composed of phrases and verses or nouns and pronouns without forming sentences according to the intention to use less language or to the others.
I efforted to reveal my idea and rhythms in this work.
This poem has an ideological depth based on an original question about human life, but the original Korean work is widely known as a poem with stunning rhythms.
Translation crafts are not always satisfactory because they cannot retain the characteristics of Korean.


Snow being piled up Night

by Choi Paul-Yearn


Undals-an Kimyong-sa
Too far to listen to the bell sound
Day by day of fighting against pulmonary disease
Time passes like falling dry leaves
Burying the sleeping wind
Snow being piled up all night
Bringing a few ripe persimmon to the guest
The warm mind similar to the light of 1000's wooden tray
Burying the feet prints too
The night deeper than the mountain valley
The wide lonesome guest room with a flickering candle
The tearing sound of pine branches
Being buried in the snow
What is life
What is death
That despair deeper than vomiting blood
That question more painful than the disease pains
All night in the outside
Falling snow piling up
Neither the monk nor the big buddha gives an answer
Undals-an Kimyong-sa
Too far to listen to the bell sound


About reading in original pronunciation
I published this work with the pronunciations attached only to it in English letters so that the original Korean work can be read. It is because I want readers who do not know Korean to taste the beautiful rhythm of this original work in Korean. This poem was written a long time ago in memory of the youth when I had been suffering more than 10 years from pulmonary tuberculosis and spent in the temple of Kimyong in the high mountain of Undal for a week to be freed from the disease of death in those days. Thankfully God cured completely with a mysterious way which my reason can never comprehend when I returned to His arms according to His wonderful calling by attending a church in one week. By leaving Buddhism and converting to Christianity, 'the sound of the large bell came to seem to be heard or not from a great distance’. However, In Korean poetry there are many outstanding works composed of phrases and verses or nouns and pronouns without forming sentences so as to use less language or to relieve rhythm or the other intentions. This poem is one of them. The original Korean work has wonderful rhythms. For those including you who are interested in Korean, I wrote the sounds made when reading the original in English. If you read it in sound several times to make use of the rhythmic feeling of the original Korean, you will feel the taste. Thanks.


눈 쌓이는 밤
nun ssahineun bam
-Reading in original pronunciation in text

운달산 김용사
Undal-san Geumlyong-sa
만 리 밖의 종소리
Mal ri bakk-ui jongsori
투병의 나날
Tubyeong-ui nanal
갈잎은 지고
Galip-eun jigo
잠든 바람을 묻으며
Jamdeun balam-eul mud-eumyeo
눈 쌓이는 밤
nun ssahineun bam
연시 두엇 내오는
yeonsi dueos naeoneun
천고의 목쟁반빛 인정
Cheongoui mogjaengbanbich injeong
발자국도 묻히고
Baljagugdo mudhigo
산골짝보다 깊어가는 밤
sangoljjagboda gipeoganeun bam
촛불 깜박이는 휘휘한 객방
chosbul kkambagineun hwihwihan gaegbang
솔가지 찢어지는 소리
solgaji jjij-eojineun soli
눈 속에 묻히는데
nun sog-e mudhineunde
삶은 무엇이고
salm-eun mueos-igo
죽음은 무엇인지
jug-eum-eun mueos-inji
각혈보다 진한 절망에
gaghyeolboda jinhan jeolmang-e
병통보다 아픈 물음
byeongtongboda apeun mul-eum
밖에는 밤새도록
bakk-eneun bamsaedolog
눈이 쌓이는데
nun-i ssah-ineunde
스님도 대불도 대답이 없는
seunimdo daebuldo daedab-i eobsneun
운달산 김용사
undalsan gim-yongsa
만 리 밖의 종소리
mal ri bakk-ui jongsori
          

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 Reviews of "Snow being piled up Night"
Reviewed by Choi Yearn
Reviewed on March 11, 2021
Thank you for your interest in my poetry. In particular, thank you for being happy that I was healed from tuberculosis.
Even if you read the original Korean work aloud, it will not be easy to feel the taste of the rhythm because the pronunciation is unfamiliar.
Thank you for complimenting my efforts and for not spared the praise that the work is 'very characteristics'.

I have an ebook of poetry collection translated in English. But i do not know how to upload it.
And now I am going to publish an other poetry collection translated by myself in English. This poetry collection consists of fifty poems including this poem. thank you.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 8, 2021
From what you wrote, I gather that you recovered from pneumonia in that high mountain sanctuary. I'm glad you recovered and are able beautiful translations between Korean and English. I realize that translation to English loses the rhythm and rhyme, but the original thought of the text comes through.

I tried reading your text of the poem in Korean but failed to achieve the expected rhythm and rhyme. Forgive me, but I will accept your expert opinion that this poem is famous for those very characteristics.

Ron


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