Inner Explosion (poem) by Linda Roman on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 7, 2005

I love the flow, Linda. As you go, you can actually feel the fury in the pace of the words and the venting to emotions - the intensity of the passion in it. Great work!!

God bless,

Sandie.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on January 23, 2005

oooo I like this ..indeed I do...wow!
Saved this one! Thankyou Linda!

Vesna :)

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on January 7, 2005

strong, raw emotion here...splendid work, Linda.

Reviewed by andrea coltman

Reviewed on January 6, 2005

Powerful write Linda, welcome to the Den and thank you for visiting my pages, Happy New Year...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Reginald Birch (Reader)

Reviewed on January 5, 2005

This is not fantasy this is real life, I could feel the anguish and relief in reading your wonderful piece.
Well done Linda,
Reg

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on December 30, 2004

"Inner Explosion" depicts the emotions to flow on to the lake of a grand poem poetized with the lexicon of a wise soul.

I enjoyed the reading of this poetic masterpiece, named "Inner Explosion".

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by William DeVault

Reviewed on December 25, 2004

Like a furious lion that hasn't eaten...nice evocation there. Keep up the good work!

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed

Reviewed on December 22, 2004

Wonderful thing about writing--it vents the emotions.
Keep it flowing outward and sharing it my sister, and allow us all to share the words and encourage you.

blessin's
cynth'ya lewis reed

Reviewed by ♥ Kari Hirshey ♥ (Reader)

Reviewed on December 17, 2004

I love the energy and passion in this write; thanks for sharing! :)
~Kari Anne~

Reviewed by Chuckie Finn (Reader)

Reviewed on December 17, 2004

I have read that one of the keys to effective writing is to capture your readers attention with your opening sentence. Well you have certainly achieved much more than that with this creative and fascinating poem. You enable your readers to ride on an emotional roller coaster ride experiencing the haunting frustration and inner wrath that seeks its remedy.

Wonderfully done, Linda. My sincere compliments.

Chuckie

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on December 17, 2004

You sure did capture this one. Big time got this one right one the nose. Beem here am here. Thank you for this. Must send this to all

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on December 16, 2004

Well Penned ....Linda
great line smooth cadence.

William ......Love & Peace

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on December 16, 2004

Very powerful write and great capture of the release!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on December 16, 2004

Linda first time I've read your work but I'M SURE I'LL READ A LOT MORE IN FUTURE. Thanks for reviewing my work as well.

Felix

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on December 15, 2004

Yup, can relate... better out than in, this one, I think! Hope you're feeling better now - and that you have been able to vent your anguish to the skies so that there will be no "payback"! Like a stopcock going off... sense a real feeling of relief! TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 11, 2004

Very powerful poetry Linda!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on December 11, 2004

Shake those emotions real good before you uncork them, that way they explode like a Pepsi leaving the bottle empty of all lifes acids. well Penned

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on December 10, 2004

Linda, raw and unrelenting write about the darker urges that reside within us all.

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on December 10, 2004

Wow, this is intense to say the least. Strong and forceful write. Excellent display of pain inflicted...both given and taken.

Allen

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 10, 2004

Powerful stuff, Linda. I could not resume breathing until you allowed me at the end of this enthralling creation. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on December 10, 2004

Welcome To Club Of Life Its Portals,Pitfalls,Downs & Outs Of Holy Hell!

Credit For Write!!

TRASK

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on December 10, 2004

Blimey new kid on the block, some write..Splendid....

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 10, 2004

wow Linda, the intensity of this poem is outstanding! your thoughts & feeling flow effortlessly in this very powerful poem ...