What a powerful write! The comparisons you made in this poem enhanced and amplified the story you were telling. We can never truly grow until- we take responsibilty for ourselves, where we are now.
Great expression of a universal truth.
-Zach
Reviewed by Bella Christopher (Reader)
Reviewed on November 19, 2006
Woman, thou art powerful and strong! I love your writing and am an
instant fan. You have a gift for writing. This piece is simply amazing.
Be well
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2006
The thing about moving...you take yourself with you.
(And Texas is a nice place to be.)
Pier, you make such a courage-giving statement here...wonderful message! one needs to realize what one has is all that matters and a change in outlook may well do the trick..to have love thrown into your path like that! What could be greater?
Btw, I love your 'motto' statement too - on the bio page.
Thank you Pier, this is so sweet, and yet sad too. Sad because on ethinks life is better on the other side of the road, but then sweet too, because love has comei nto this person's life. The last two lines sums the poem up nicely tho:
you're going to be okay
right where you are
And this is so true too. Thanx Pier for sharing.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be>"
I got such a heady visual from this, Pier...almost as if a scene from a movie...even facial expressions were clear in my mind as this man gets a kick of life in the nick of time....
Taylor
A mellifluous aroma from the flower of wisdom can be felt from the magical lines of this poetic beauty. "No Doubt About It" has opened its Jar of friendship and fraternity to scent the pillars of love.
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John Michael AKA Pizzaman
You have graced us with a masterful and stalwart gem . . . superb!
Hugs,
Lance
Great expression of a universal truth.
-Zach
instant fan. You have a gift for writing. This piece is simply amazing.
Be well
(And Texas is a nice place to be.)
B&R
Btw, I love your 'motto' statement too - on the bio page.
Gina
you're going to be okay
right where you are
And this is so true too. Thanx Pier for sharing.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be>"
Taylor
thanks for sharing
William
Love & Peace
This is a good write. Well-done!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
A mellifluous aroma from the flower of wisdom can be felt from the magical lines of this poetic beauty. "No Doubt About It" has opened its Jar of friendship and fraternity to scent the pillars of love.
I salute You, Poet.
In gratitude,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
The sound bite was very complimentary to your gentle thoughts.
Richard
Regis