Nicely written--a poem we should all take to heart. I worry about the younger generation that never takes in ALL the beautiful things that you mention.
Reading this poem is like drinking herbal tea,it soothes the soul and the mind.It warms the heart and cleanse the spirit.Great poem,I love it,take care
What a great and timely message in the "hustle and bustle" of today's world.
You should charge for your services, Pier.
I hear blood pressures dropping all around me.
I hear parents now taking the time to really listen to
their children's expressions.
And in the silence I hear husbands and wives and
significant others pausing to actually listen to one another.
What a treasure: To be still and share the silence.
Beautiful write Pire
It was a pleasure to read your wonderful thoughts
So gentle and smooth as silk,
the music just perfect for the imagery mood.
Thank You
Pier...this is outstandingly lovely!
The composition reminds me a a heartbeat...or pulse as Jude expresses below...it is almost like an interal chant used during meditation...
Great photo which is my cuppa Earl Grey all righty... I won't stay long cos, being an enormous natterbox, I will just ruin the whole ambience of this. BUT, safe to say I like the thrust of this immensely - it's direction and specificity, Pier, and to me it seems so fizzing that indeed you need to utter the dictum to "Be still" otherwise all that energy could just get tooooooooo exciting! Makes ME feel highly energised, anyways... Is the coda "... and know that I am God"? If so, I'm sure He'd like the enthusiasm here! TY Kate xx
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Love this.......write
I'm resting any chance I get...
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David Hightower’s lyrically expansive meditation on the whims of fate and the unpredictability of the human condition fill the pages of THE HANGING MAN DREAMS with thrilling music and mesmerizing imagery. Hightower’s richly infused voice echoes the e
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Edwin
You write with a confidence that is unmatched - an outstanding poem! I love your work!!
Hugs,
Lance
Blessings Pier,
~Gwendolyn
You should charge for your services, Pier.
I hear blood pressures dropping all around me.
I hear parents now taking the time to really listen to
their children's expressions.
And in the silence I hear husbands and wives and
significant others pausing to actually listen to one another.
What a treasure: To be still and share the silence.
Wonderful!
Richard
Great penning! Thank you for sharing the stillness of life in "Shhhh!"
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
It was a pleasure to read your wonderful thoughts
So gentle and smooth as silk,
the music just perfect for the imagery mood.
Thank You
Love & paece
William
How truly refreshing is your poetry......beautiful music, too!
Happy Resurrection Day!
Blessings, Rhonda
The composition reminds me a a heartbeat...or pulse as Jude expresses below...it is almost like an interal chant used during meditation...
Regis
Wise thoughts of profound existential reflections. A beautiful composition to enchant and inspire.
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
*whispering* i love it--beautifully penned ode to s o l i t u d e and quiet reflection!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Eileen
Love,
CJ
Shhhhh....no more!!
I LOVE IT...:))) !!
Love Tinka
I'm resting any chance I get...