Your intro leads me to believe that perhaps something tragic, perhaps medical, is happening. Anyway your writing is superb and your timing is great. As the others have indicated, there's a lot going on in this poem. 1994? I'm glad that it's posted here now.
Eeva, you did well to not "hide the thoughts you had inside" with this write. I like the idea over and over of movement forward, legs running, moving, reaching, breathing, flowing, laughing, living and lastly " changing" as we must learn to adapt or we indeed come to a standstill. Life always move on , whether we like it or not. Good rhyme too.
Dan
PS I could put this to song, I think a lot of good poetry can also be a song sometimes.
I loved this mini rant, Eeva, and the rhyming just set it off. Questions. Doubts. So much to prove? I set about proving things too back in tha day, but I headed in the wrong direction to do it and wasted a life. Please be careful . . . is all I'm sayin'.
Under Amber Skies, written by author and poet Jill Eisnaugle, is a wonderful collection of rhyming poetry guaranteed to please every reader. In this, her second book, she writes of new friendships kindled, as well as old friendships solidified. She g
First Edition Translation of Teselas by Carmen Crespo X111 César Simón Poetry Prixe 2016 Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop and Amparo Arrospíde
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PS I could put this to song, I think a lot of good poetry can also be a song sometimes.