“Spirit” (rough3)(I think this one works)
the love I know
flutter fulfilling – an
ennobling amusement
giving heave unto
> a beating Sanctuary … on my ear – I hear and breaths)
billowing warm bliss –
it flows, entwined, our indulgent lips
… makes me … I go, as I go
turning, forever, 'round … here
coursing spiritual actuality –
proactive deliverance, as
I go
> Gales of Zephyrs – exalting breaths – its potion fills the hollows)
given in to the midst ...
unknown place – motley myriads –
it gives me this…
Written By Darkest Angel
Written March 9, 2017
“Spirit” (rough2)(likeable)
the LOVE I know
Flutter fulfilling – an
Ennobling amusement
Giving heave unto
> a beating Sanctuary … on my ear – I hear and breaths)
billowing warm bliss –
It flows, entwined, our indulgent lips
… makes me… I go, as I go
turning, forever, 'round … here
coursing SPIRITUAL actuality –
proactive deliverance …
as I go
>. Gales of Zephyrs – exalting breaths
These POTIONs fill the hollows --
They give me this…
Written By Darkest Angel
Written March 5, 2017
This poem is highly related to "Spirit"; however, when it comes, I will give "Spirit" its distinction. This is for those who put question mark reviews on my writings :) :
“Where, does it, come from”
Beautiful wind,
Why come my way
Ah, you love, not one
Gifting visits around
The laughing ones—
In you—out you
Without you, what
I do—a serene macabre, and
Still....
My lungs ... though, full
Your gifting visits
Keep me—this soft touch—
Softening anguish
This fire, you, not,
Sustain of me
Die down … blow
A—way to
Cool and to
Vein-y Creeks
Written By, Darkest Angel
Written June 26, 2010
“Spirit” (rough1)
the LOVE I know
Flutter fulfilling – an
Ennobling amusement
Giving heave unto
> a beating Sanctuary … on my ear – I hear and breaths)
billowing warm bliss –
a FLOW blown entwined your – indulgent lips
Makes me – I go, as I go
turning, forever, 'round … here
coursing SPIRITUAL actuality –
proactive deliverance …
as I go
POTION fill(ing) hollow(s)
Written By Darkest Angel
Written March 5, 2017