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Park it
by Darkest Angel → (All Poetry by Darkest Angel)
Thursday, March 9, 2017    Rated "G" by the Author.
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"Park it"

 

 

 


Pulling into the
Driveway of life ending--
Checking the rearview
Mirror with noises
And smoke--sputtering
Loping and bucking--
End to end

Nothing behind
Worth a second look

Tired of this junk
Not even worth a trade
In for a new one

Kick the--fight the
Open the ... door; feet
Touch the pile of trash
Falling out on the
Floor ...

If I had only put the
Bolts back ... like
They were, before I
Dismantled ...
Everything ....

 

 

 

 

 

Written By, Darkest Angel
Written October 12, 2010 


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Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on March 11, 2017
After reading this I went outside to see if someone had stolen my car. Alas, it's still there.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on March 10, 2017
Reading this, at this time in my life completely says it all insofar as I can relate, Darkest, and relate I damn well do. Of all the poems have read, THIS is the one I wish I had written. This is good!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 10, 2017
Great allegory! And there's a number of fatal system failures right around the corner to end it all… The failed engine or transmission… A part you can't get anymore vital to the drivetrain… Rust eating a big hole in the floor to fall through… And finally, that inevitable wreck that puts everything in the junkyard gravesite.

One would only wish there were dedicated frame off restorers for the human body like there are for four wheeled junkyard beauties.

Ron

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on March 10, 2017
Interesting and thought provoking.


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