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To Dream an Eternity with You
by Darkest Angel → (All Poetry by Darkest Angel)
Wednesday, March 22, 2017 Rated "G" by the Author.

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“To Dream an Eternity with You” When the rain falls, Love I am lost in my mind— I don’t know what to do I find myself, crossed up—in time, Searching for you Dropping like the raindrops falling, drearily and recklessly Onto the shelter above me, I scream your name; Hoping, when the rain no longer falls, The sun will spew warmth, and Luminous light— Bringing you into view Graceful, too, is… The beauty of you, in night— Bathing in the precious glow, cast by moonlight My souls urge engulfs the simple things— My thoughts tether in calamity—for this Vigorous longing to see you, and Feel your presence, in spring Forever, Love Love is, to me, the things you do, Your caressing breath—the endless life of your speech Now, the rain is fallen I find myself—lost, in deep sleep All—over you, I fall I am … raindrops … in my Dreams…. Written By, Darkest Angel (Rewritten February 20, 26, 2010) Rewrite “To Dream an Eternity with You” As the rain falls, I am lost in my mind— I don’t know what to do I find myself crossed up in time—searching For you Dropping like raindrops, drearily and recklessly, Onto the shelter above me—I scream your name— Hoping that, when the rain no longer falls, The sun will spew warmth and Luminous light— Bringing you into view…. Graceful, too, is… The beauty of you, in night— Bathing in the precious glow—cast by moonlight My soul’s urges engulf the simple things— My thoughts tether with calamity—for this Vigorous longing to see you, and Feel your presence…in spring Forever, Love Love is, to me, the things you do, Your caressing breath—the exciting life of your speech Now … the rain is fallen Here, I am—lost…in deep sleep…. All over you, I fall I am…raindrops…in my Dreams…. Written By, Darkest Angel (Rewritten May 6, 2010)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 25, 2017

I love dreams; sometimes they are so intense that I wake up and have to take a moment to realize what is reality; very disappointing at times. At other times, I like the dream so much that I will myself back to sleep and get back into the dream; much to my delight. Thank you for sharing, D.A. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on March 23, 2017

Certainly wanders like thoughts in a dream. Always moving, morphine changing like a cloud passing by the sun.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

An interesting perspective in which the writer chooses his/her words cautiously. "raindrops in my dreams" is an evocative image for me. Peace to you... r

Reviewed by Mystic Rose

Your personification techniques are good darkest angel, what better thing to be than the rain when we want to show how love can be insane, water is permeable and pliable like love is, you write like an angel on fire, have a great day DA, xo