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cheater
by Darkest Angel → (All Poetry by Darkest Angel)
Thursday, March 23, 2017    Rated "G" by the Author.
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 "cheater"

 

 

 


I don't care ...
I don't care ... I
don't care ... who
loses, as long as, I
win--I'll even cut the
ropes to let the game
begin--off, as I linger
behind (not truly a competitor),
to my deviant plans of
yesterdays to pull you
down ... with
my last wind ...
I've laid the traps in
foresight--while you slept,
I crept ... in veils of
night ... plotting

Before you closed your
eyes, I placed the blanket
neatly over you--tucked you in
and I began ...
to chant in silence,

"I won't let you win ... "

 

 

 

 

Written By, Darkest Angel
Written November 11, 2010


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Reviewed on March 25, 2017
A little trouble understanding this one. Other than the gist the games people play. You have style that's for sure.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 25, 2017
It is true that some people are good at getting you to trust them... ...and even better at betraying you. Love and peace to you, D.A.,

Regis

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on March 24, 2017
Life is a rat race, be careful of the cheese you nibble!

Reviewed by Mystic Rose
Reviewed on March 24, 2017
Lots of strength in the breath of your poetry, deep as inkwell, you need to know who to trust these days, and when you can safely close both eyes lol, Love the intensity of it all, x

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 24, 2017
There is a certain, hopefully small, percentage of people who found out very young that they could get away with lying and turned it into cheating their way through life. But I find that chanting over someone sleeping is a really strange way of gaining control over them.

Ron

Reviewed by Darkest Angel
Reviewed on March 24, 2017
I wrote this thinking of evil minded people who are trusted by honest people or at least those who try to maintain some good will towards others. Unfortunately, we come to trust people who really have no good intentions towards us. This is all about the race of life.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on March 24, 2017
The writer allows the reader enough leeway to ascertain context. I'm thinking the biggest mystery here is what winning really means. r


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