For the sake of his gaze upon me (poem) by Darkest Angel on AuthorsDen

For the sake of his gaze upon me
by Darkest Angel → (All Poetry by Darkest Angel)
Monday, March 27, 2017 Rated "G" by the Author.

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“fewer endless cycles” “for the sake of his gaze upon me” Pretty, lone, cyber-girl-driver caught up in his magnetic appeal … a glimpse of him, suddenly, streamed to her, cute, pink H.U.D. Dazed and twirling … slowly falling, lazily, through thermosphere, resembling a bumble bee on inadequate wings broken G.P.S. offset her intergalactic journey to ride, but, her feather-weight, sensually shaped spacecar cajoles while she heads, southerly, on those flimsy wings, towards him, sauntering on his voice of dreams … she quivers Spinning, daft, her chronic whirl faulty, electronic, blunder … a space-car thing in tints of pink coughing carcinogens all over heaven … coming, down, like a top slowing, in an awkward wobble Seeing her, he could not distinguish his dreams from some kind of jumbled up scenery his seers gate reported … a hologram? … tapping keys! BUT, SHE IS REAL – LY COM – MING DOWN! he shifted left—then right … BAAAAAAAM! She, lands, right, smack, dab, in the middle … Written By Darkest Angel r.w. April 8, 2017 “For the sake of his gaze upon me” (rough1)(had to have fun first) Her whirl is chronic silly electronic blunder a space-car thing in tints of pink coughing carcinogens all over heaven – a rambling fury how could she have known, when she headed south, gazing preciously into his strong, careful, eyes she was actually due north My god, these things … … made by Acme … ? humph, a RESET BUTTON … ? CLICK! … the stupid thing BOBBLES it should have shook or wobbled afraid his gaze has all but became a memory – lost she torques in outer space, and her jeweled tears are falling – so ashamed, she pulls off her wooden leg and bangs … the dash – it wobbles loose … intensely watching – IT CONKED HIM! her giddy voice slurring happy tones -- getting close stars around his warm brow – his shapely face what the … I'm in outer space – not you! HEY! H-E-Y! Unexpected reentry is causing heat in the cockpit – she was barreling way too fast downward – twirling 'round, 'round and 'round – shaking Written By Darkest Angel Written March 27, 2017

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 24, 2017

A kaleidoscope of images... ...the verses leave me whirling. Thank you for sharing, DA. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on March 28, 2017

Aside from strange references like a wacky hitchhiker, I have no idea where this is going--or coming. But apparently there are some eye candy teasing going on that elicits a bonk.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Colorful first stanza. Like a good appetizer before the main course. Visuals could well portend a comedic sex film. (-: I'm sitting here wondering about your mind Dark; maybe more Vitamin B12? Hahaha. Enjoyed this. Continued inspiration. Peace... r

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Second draft is action packed! voice of dreams took it down down down.