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You, me, I, we, us
by Darkest Angel → (All Poetry by Darkest Angel)
Saturday, November 24, 2018 Rated "G" by the Author.

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My beams before you. Are we one together, our beams before them?
You, me, I, we, us I give Crucifix high Sacrificing life Blood pour soul Tearing skin Never abates the sin Down many times But, I went Again… again For you Death aggravating Evil wraps around my Brow a thorny crown Cutting in owned Sin Who am I To live or die For you To light your way To stay nailed up For you Beams in my eyes Sins my soul possesses Evil hands caressed me Stinch of contrived love Of cursed desires What with weakness For you Down down on my knees Liquified my face combined Multitudes of times Melted upon surfaces Praying to God For you… Us Written by Darkest Angel Written November 23, 2018

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Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on November 30, 2018

The image of Christ keeps coming to my head while reading this poem, and how he had suffered for us. This poem intensifies his suffering and I must say it captivates my senses so well I feel the pain too.

Sandie

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on November 29, 2018

never stop writing

m

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on November 26, 2018

I'm stunned by the intensity of the images and the references , a thorny crown was placed on the true King indeed. But to whomever you are speaking too I hope there on the side of good. A very interesting piece , a little unsettling for sure.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on November 24, 2018

Very intensely felt.

Ron

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