Inside OUT (poem) by Darkest Angel on AuthorsDen

Inside OUT
by Darkest Angel → (All Poetry by Darkest Angel)
Monday, December 31, 2018 Rated "G" by the Author.

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Positively me!
"Inside OUT" caressing glass wings On the outside looking into your cloudy thickening, ill feeling glass scales Your fiery breath contacts my soul's sanctuary, though, births a confused fire… will it warm or burn me as I am restored -- as I stream peace like waterfalls into your channels On the inside I am a heartful dreamer I am devoted to simplify -- to solve -- to collect our pieces I am tickled to wish as hell pours into us blindly imagining you smiling in serene water -- ! I missed something… ?! ! Was I streaming deliriously…?! On the outside I am a heartful dreamer I am devoted to simplify -- to solve -- to collect our pieces I am tickled to wish as hell pours into us blindly imagining you smiling in serene water -- On the outside I lay on blessed green pastures, not near water, though, I'll move indefinitely towards you -- ! I missed something ! Written by Darkest Angel Written December 31, 2018

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on January 4, 2019

Sometimes, even when we turn ourselves inside out for others to see, they still won't understand the person we are. Great thought-provoking piece of poetry.

Sandie

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on January 1, 2019

I believe I missed something. I don't really understand your emotions, "inside-out." However, you have expressed it beautifully.

Ron

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

The way you have crafted this rendition is completely intriguing , for me it brings up many thoughts of how many times I have been completely wrong about a persons character and yet inevitably attracted to them, your images are powerful , they stand out.