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A Tearful Good-bye To My Only Son
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This poem was written for a friend who lost her only son. I wrote this poem because I could see her pain in her eyes even though she didn't speak of how broken her heart felt inside.


"A Tearful Good-bye To My Only Son"

Heaven called my son's name and,
He closed his eyes in death.
But in the distant shadows of darkness,
I know he saw me as I wept.

How do a mother say, "Good-bye," to her only,
Son? What words she use to say, for such a,
Tearful and sorrowful, "Good-bye?" In words,
Her heart spoke as she cried and prayed.

My heart now forever burden with grief, my son.
I know you can feel my heavy heart as it tries to speak.
On that day you left me, forever restrained within,
A broken-heart of grief.

Those were the only words to use as her broken heart,
Spoke while she wept.

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Reviewed on April 16, 2004
(((alice)))

i'm sorry for your friend's loss. i hope this brings comfort to her mourning soul. a most tender, emotive write--well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(

Reviewed on April 16, 2004
very sad write, alice! nice of you to do this for your friend; i am sure she will be touched when she sees this!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :( >tears <

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2004
This is so sad...nice of you to do this for
your friend...floria

Reviewed by Mary Wilson
Reviewed on April 16, 2004
I wish I had this to give to my sister back when she lost her son. These words fit her perfectly. Thank you for sharing.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 15, 2004
This is a fine tribute for your friend!
A very difficult subject to write about
you did it well!

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on April 15, 2004
Considering the sad nature of this poem you did an excellent job portraying the obvious grief through words...


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