This is one of that is important to me. Right after I entered it into my computer program, I submitted it to Authors Den. I just read this for the first time and am now sharing it. It is like a prayer. While it might be somewhat confussing, just re-read.
God Have mercy On us all If you are there. If not, Let us all Forgive each other. Let us nonetheless do What we would require Of him! There being No other We must live With Consternation Hope And Yearning For what Cannot be named Nor confirmed But owed Since we are human - Both most And least That consciousness And conscience Can bear, Vehicle yet we breathe.
All that We despise And criticize We see We know In ourselves And hate That it is so, All we Would be And do.
We admire Where some/does it Out there When it Is true And done For there Is a home plate We seek And yearn to claim.
One And all We seek To balance The brave And glory Of our lives Short of brave And plus To Glory In as much Discrepancy As possible. Zero Plus one Is enough To rout despair. Give us that God If you are there.
If not Let's all Cooperate Give and take With "Justice Tempered With Mercy" - For our sake. Allow us, God Or we ourselves, At least A Modicum Of Superiority Opposed to inferiority On our Own scale Of worth.
Dear Addie,
I think this is the first time I've read your work (forgive me if I'm wrong) It reads well. A powerful prayer / poem that holds a lot of truth. Well done!
Chanti
Very good, reminds me of John Lennon's song "Imagine"...
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on February 19, 2005
This is wonderfully and powerfully stated. A marvelous prayer that you are right it needs to be reread and I did not find it confusing. My thoughts have been along this line too.
A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
I think this is the first time I've read your work (forgive me if I'm wrong) It reads well. A powerful prayer / poem that holds a lot of truth. Well done!
Chanti
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)