Kate,
The Song from the 70's Pina Colada rings in my head as I read your poem.
It's all about destiny, darling, and how we travel toward that elusive butterfly....
Nicely done Kate my sweet friend.
Peace, love and light,
Amber
Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on January 28, 2014
Kate, You open up our senses with the words that you use
and we become participles and cling on...Enjoyed as Always!
THis is really leaving out the cold windswept snow to melt within that weave of the hammocks contents. What beauty therein lies especially with that one stanza:
"Breathing in resonance,
breathing out rhyme,
not even time
lies between them."
You have my attention Kate, your writes are truly inspirational journeys
Amor
Truer love was never written. Your way with words providing deep meaning is outstanding. Exactly how I feel when she's holding me close. Swaying to our own special breeze and intoxicated by the warmth.
Suspended belief about biorthymic. Then I see your circular thoughts and the depth of the romance between the couple entwined in perfect bliss in perfect time. In contact with nature two lovers collide on the hammock that the union of souls poetically collide.
Natures dance always enchants when two become one with sublime divine love. Xx
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
Questions, unquestioned discoveries, and answers in parable and rhyme…. This collection records a journey starting with a 1960s retrospective and the first man on the moon, moving to a new millennium welcomed in with a terrorist spin, family crises,
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The Song from the 70's Pina Colada rings in my head as I read your poem.
It's all about destiny, darling, and how we travel toward that elusive butterfly....
Nicely done Kate my sweet friend.
Peace, love and light,
Amber
and we become participles and cling on...Enjoyed as Always!
Deborah
As always you stir the readers imagination beyond the printed words.
Most happy to read you once again.
George
Diana...
and lifts it up to the sky!
"Breathing in resonance,
breathing out rhyme,
not even time
lies between them."
You have my attention Kate, your writes are truly inspirational journeys
Amor
Regis
Ron
Natures dance always enchants when two become one with sublime divine love. Xx
budd