I enjoyed reading your poem about the moment. We all have moments in which we live in. Some are good, bad, and some are filled with happiness. This is what your poem brought out about the moment, the excitement, thrill, fear, uncertainties, thanks for such a good write.
Dammit! I love how you write! This reads like you're playing God. But then, it seems like the things that every politician seems to try to do. Brilliant writing, and your thought processes ain't too bad either. ;-)
If you tend to believe romantic, passionate, masculine poetry is a thing of past eras, read "She Intrigues Me," and be swept away in the beautiful craft of a contemporary poet of love.
Ron
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fascinating couplets, Kate