Time Locked (poem) by Sharon Jordan on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 4, 2009

Great thinking put to pen and posted here. Glad I saw it and pulled it up and read it. Just browsing today and getting some very good writes to ponder over as I can ponder over this one too.

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on December 18, 2007

Philosophical poetic beauty... "Time Locked" abounds in contents and message.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on October 7, 2007

From the moment we take that first breath, until the day of our last, "Time Locked" and every moment is PAST. . .So inspiring. . .
Excellent write Sharon...
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on October 4, 2007

An excellent write Sharon
In time once the movement is set in motion
There is no returning
Then again, time is but a concept.

Peace & love Be With You
William

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on October 4, 2007

Nice work...one can sit and view back in time and wish to change the events and or situations...to better or improve or even stop time ...yet it is all within the destiny of life...

nicely penned thought...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury

Reviewed on August 24, 2007

You have captured a thought that often comes to my mind. What if I could go back just for a moment,and tell someone how much I cared. Enjoyed

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on August 18, 2007

Very clever writing...well done

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on August 18, 2007

Enjoyed this very much my friend...I know if we could go back...we would all change something. Wouldn't it be grand if we could, but as life would have only occasionally do we get a second chance...but we've always got our memory and what a grand thing that is...enjoyed this very much!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 17, 2007

Spot on!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on August 16, 2007

Talk about hitting home! Very clever of you to devise a form that
very nearly makes the point in-and-of itself. Knowing. . .Ever. . .Locked. . .Dying. . .Past. . .Y E S!
Thank you for writing and sharing this. Blessings+++, 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on August 16, 2007

Sharon, this is a very smart poem. This is why people need to treat each moment like it is their last. ~ Sara

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on August 16, 2007

You and I need a means of playing a game, CONTEMPLATION, on the air waves of the computer. You are good at it, and this poem proves it by a wide margin. Thank you for stretching my mind. Top-notch writing and reasoning ! ! ! - Bill

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 16, 2007

You provide substance for thought via your verses here, Sharon. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 16, 2007

The clock traditionally has been linked to life and death, but in this write you bring the clock to life and make it a living entity as it traps the souls of the unwary. As I stop for a second or perhaps three, I think back at all the major events in my life and yes most of them were less than a minute but did change the course of time for me. Brilliant write Sharon.

Felix L Perry

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on August 16, 2007

It is always good when we can honestly poetize the struggle of being human. A touching write!
Richard