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Been having a bit of a writing drought...a Thank You to Abel for the inspiration! :)
When morning mist on blacktop creeps and midnight rain's returned to sleep, as puddles form amidst the miles, deceiving the forlorn passersby. Glorious mirage of sweet relief offers respite for weary feet, or souls and hearts in desperate need of sanctity found, however brief. Pools appear as dream fulfilled, not cognizant of moment's thrill, a single lunge into uncertain fate, beneath a wheel where Reaper waits. Courageous surrender into the deep, eyes open too late into the leap, a shallow pond then tire screech an oasis of death is what has been reaped.
Reviews of "Leap Frog"
New Poetry by Ann Piatt
Have you seen Tuck?
anywayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy..........this is good.....love the style.....I am a rhyme junkie.......and I like drama......even if its green!
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Wonderful write and excellent lesson. Never leave the sanctity of home to seek the mysteries of the unknown. Gotta love your rhyme and the frog green lettering.(lol)
Love Tinka
poor little froggie :(
but, o, what a write! perfect meter and rhyme capture you and pull you into this piece--BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
MORAL: look before you leap!! :)