An enjoyable reading on thoughts of life and death, flowing under the rhythm of the drums of curiosity, entering the tunnel of imagination like a firefly through the shadows of doubt.
"Not a Good Night (Revision)" is a good poetic meal for the evening.
Healthy Springtime, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on March 22, 2005
Revised, or unrevised, this is a powerfully potent piece
of work.
And I sure hope it is written about an allegorical figure,
and not about yourself!
“The woman or man who is a poet, or fiction writer, or playwright, or all of these, is engaged constantly in a jazz ballet of vocabularies, passions, genders, histories, perspectives, death, love, and life. The music of revelation announces itself to
Great job! I hear the words and rhythm perfectly. Knowing you, I agree. You'll go kicking!
Cute baby update!
Cynthia
An enjoyable reading on thoughts of life and death, flowing under the rhythm of the drums of curiosity, entering the tunnel of imagination like a firefly through the shadows of doubt.
"Not a Good Night (Revision)" is a good poetic meal for the evening.
Healthy Springtime, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
of work.
And I sure hope it is written about an allegorical figure,
and not about yourself!
perfect revision ...
Jennifer
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
some parts made me smile.........
some say.......oh yeah
all in all.........I saw.......WOW!
pax A