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The Crush
by Diana J Legun → (All Poetry by Diana J Legun)
Thursday, August 28, 2025    Rated "G" by the Author.
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Power of the Word


Poem Artwork

The Crush

It happens so fast,
so suddenly —
to worst from best.

Walking with grace
in her beauty,
holding  goodness —
her open face.

How just one word
slaps dignity away —
no touch of hand,
just what they say.

Just what she heard.

~~ djl

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 Reviews of "The Crush"
Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on August 30, 2025
Thank you very much, Ron, for your comment. I value your opinion. The sheer dress effect in this digital sketch is a brush tool called ‘triangulum’ and it has the transparency that is the last layer of the piece. These digital paintings have panes of work, pancaked under/over each other in layers that can be worked with independent of each other. The software is called ‘Procreate.’ and done on an iPad using an iPencil as the brush tool. ~~ djl

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 30, 2025
I have learned not to let nasty words crush me. But I think that women are more sensitive than men, and take words more seriously.

I must say that you are totally back when it comes to artistry. I believe that is the best of your original work that I've ever seen. How are you achieved the transparency in such a realistic way is a real skill having done a bit of wax pencil on construction paper rendering.

Ron

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on August 29, 2025
Asl always, your ability to arrest in your readers such emotion and contemplation with just a few words is remarkable. And your painting... such depth as well. Yes, we can all find that moment, or perhaps many moments, when our world can come crashing down from a single word spoken, or sometimes, written. One of the most precious principles we own are those building blocks we gave to have some dignity. Thank you for another brief, but oh so lasting, few words.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on August 29, 2025
"Holding goodness - her open face", such fine lines, standouts, in this brief but powerful poem. And "ow just one word slaps dignity away", suggesting the power of words (a word) and the fragility of "dignity". Love this.


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