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Do I Fit In
by Anniemoh Ohio → (All Poetry by Anniemoh Ohio)
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Nameless faces staring
Searching my nakedness
Though I’m clothed
Cotton covered curves

Thoughts buried behind
Hollow peering eyes
Leather-skinned bodies
Expressionless, lifeless 

Judging me
Silently inquiring
Figuring out
If I’m one of them

Common goals
Different reasons
Motivation unknown
Aura of competition

Time will tell
Answers revealed
Shrouds lifted
Insides exposed
 


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 Reviews of "Do I Fit In"
Reviewed by Anne Brooks
Reviewed on March 21, 2005
I really enjoyed your poem.It made me relive the desperate moments of my adolescence and there is great truth to your writing. anne Pawlak.

Reviewed by John Mayer
Reviewed on March 15, 2005
Sounds like a typical office / family get-together. Did you dance?

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on September 21, 2004
I can relate to this.
I keep my fingers crossed for you that everything will work out well...


Reviewed by Danielle Mundy
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
I can definitely relate to this, Anne..or will be able to better afetr Wednesday. But I'm sure it is frightening to "go back" so to speak and deal with all the judgmental attitudes that tend to go hand in hand with school :-)

Reviewed on September 15, 2004
Anne,

Unique and profound - this is a very-well written and thought out poem - enjoyed!

Robert

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2004
Or do they fit in?

Always be ones self.

Great introspective kinda write..

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on September 13, 2004
Very unique and masterful I loved this one. LP

Reviewed on September 12, 2004
Suspicion is a protective tool

Reviewed by D May (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2004
Very original poem here. You have captured this vulnerability and put it on paper perfectly. Well done. : )

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on September 12, 2004
This is such an interesting poem with a wonderful climatic ending.

Time will tell
Answers revealed
Shrouds lifted
Insides exposed

So true!
Chanti

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 11, 2004
Great write!

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on September 11, 2004
Ah, the way of the world... Very nicely crafted, Anne!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 11, 2004
Incredible depth in each segment!Excellent insightful poetry!

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on September 11, 2004
Well done... Each strophe tell its own story. Great poetic truth.


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