Cold Hearted (poem) by Danielle Mundy on AuthorsDen

Cold Hearted
by Danielle Mundy → (All Poetry by Danielle Mundy)
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Ok, so I got the idea for this from situation that a friend of mine is in where a person that she dated won't take the hint that she wasn't THAT interested when they were together and that she wants him to leave her the H alone. It's kind of mean, but it's not exactly me saying to someone, so I suppose it's ok.
why can't you just leave me be? let me wallow in my reveries I'm breaking down again crashing, I just don't know when and you're in the middle of my mess knowing you weren't even second best I wish I could see what you see in me love's not even real it's just pretty lies it's a chemical reaction that soon fades with time and I don't know what I need but I know it's not you I can't love you back and I don't want to maybe it's history long forgotten but you were never what I wanted and I was there every night laughing while you cried watching you quietly bleed am I REALLY what you need? I wish I could see what you see in me love's not even real it's just pretty lies it's a chemical reaction that soon fades with time and I don't know what I need but I know it's not you I can't love you back and I don't want to so leave the pieces where they lie don't whisper your sad goodbyes I never even bothered with hello that if nothing should let you know I'm not worth this pathetic disgrace I'll never let you be my saving grace I just wish I could see what you ever saw in me love's not even real it's just pretty lies it's a chemical reaction that soon fades with time and I don't know what I need but I know it's not you I can't love you back and I don't want to

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on September 8, 2009

I can't love you back
and I don't want to

Harsh and real but honest; this could be a song it seems to me. Nicely done, Danielle. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Michelle Mead

Reviewed on April 14, 2008

This should be read by some people who just don't GET IT. I don't think this is cold-hearted, but real. Sometimes, people act like stalkers when you just want it over. Good write.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

A very dramatic look at a heartache.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on April 11, 2008

Oh boy, life can sure be difficult at times and this sure sounds like one of them. What to do, what to do? Try speaking your mind point blank and if the other choses not listen there may be an even bigger problem on the horizon....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Well sometimes all that gets through in situations like that is the brutatl truth and this write although not brutal, is honest and final, and if the hint were not taken after this than I would worry that the recipriant has possible stalker potential. Well done Danielle.

Hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Danielle,

I've missed you - and you come back with a roaring, thought provoking piece - wow. Powerfully penned.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)

So very true -- Love's an action not a chemical reaction and we would all be less slashed to pieces in life if we took relationships slow in the order God ordained to keep the pain at a minimum. Honeymoon first and than see if your compatible? Not for me.......See if your compatible and than the delights of the Honeymoon AFTER time tested. Great write -- Deborah