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You Know Who You Are
by Pierre Ortega → (All Poetry by Pierre Ortega)
Tuesday, July 24, 2018 Rated "G" by the Author.

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you shatter the silence inside my soul you know who you are somehow because of you I hear the call of love and I am whole your voice it makes me laugh and sometimes the look in your eyes can make me cry you play in joy within my mind in your own way you show me life is better when we're kind you put your love within my heart and give me your loneliness and I do my best to do my part to hold them as gently as I hold my own.

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Reviews of "You Know Who You Are"

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on June 27, 2021

My kind of poetry. I can completely relate to the theme you put forward through your verses, Pierre. Love, peace, and best wishes to you,

Regis. 🙏🌼🌺🍁

Reviewed by John Herlihy

Reviewed on December 26, 2018

My take on the controversial line: You hold them both, the love and the loneliness, as your own. So well said.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on July 26, 2018

There's a bit of love/hate in this poem. But I guess life is like that.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on July 25, 2018

My take on, "You put your love within my heart and give me your loneliness..."

She gave you her all inclunding her "loneliness" meant she gave you all all includning her loneliess, knowing you would be able to make her loneliness go away forever.

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on July 25, 2018

There is a sweet rhythm to your pen; I could hear a voice to the words, nicely done.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 25, 2018

Everything was nice and dandy with this poem until I got to the part where you said,

"You put your love within my heart and give me your loneliness..."

Sorry, I didn't catch what you were trying to say.

Did you actually mean to say that when she puts her love within your heart and now you're feeling whole, but not lonely? I don't understand why she puts her love within your heart to make you feel her loneliness. Shouldn't she be also in love too?

It boggles my mind.

Sandie

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