Inquisitive woman.
Dream-lovely black woman.
Woman with my soul
glowing naked inside her heart.
Songs and tears overflow the midnight secret
of our lips butterflying magic
each praying spells to save the other
from the hissing stones
of a southern desert piled high
with smoking skulls and shattered spirits.
Ancient black love.
A morning soaked wet with storms.
Twilight blowing warm between
petals of jazz and magnolia.
The divine black voice
of a holy blues man
wraps us shameless inside
the tattooed halo of our angelic madness.
Who am I to say
“hush little baby”
with the moon sobbing gardens of bliss upon the ebony chest of the night?
How can I command
“don’t you cry”
with all these stars weeping crystal roses at your beautiful brown feet?
Aberjhani
© 3/4/2005
Esteemed Poet, you are much respected.
With appreciation,
Carol Phelan Aebby
of a southern desert piled high
with smoking skulls and shattered spirits."
the abyss is a hard place to steer clear of as it hypnotizes many who gaze into it....
the angelic voice is not always an easy one to listen to
:) gypsie
Poetic nuggets from the gold mine of Poetry are found
in "Abstractions of a Passion Divine".
I salute You, Sublime Poet!
May the world get richer reading Your work.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
you move mountains in my soul with your words--thank you
..poignant line..only SHE could have YOUR soul..the soul the TWO-IN-ONE share..indeed..:)
I saved this ..
ty Aberjhani..I am so pleased I came upon your site..
Vanessa:)
Your words like sweet soft sensuous velvet. A pure delight to read, exquisitely penned with your incredible passion and understanding.
warm hugs
Elga
Your writing peels off layers of myself, exposing parts of who I am that've been in the dark for a long time. Your writing makes me think, ponder, discuss with the myriad voices who live within me, your points, the messages of your words. It's like drinking, fresh, cool, crystal clean water after being parched for so long.
I always come away from your writing a better person, a more whole person. I feel like someone who found a priceless treasure they can share with the world.
Exemplary write ... stunning piece - wonderful!!
Best regards,
Robert
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
Your work is always a wondrous delight for me. I learn so much from your unique and fresh approach to poetry. There is only one like you but I suspect there would be many who would want to emulate.
Beautiful passionate poem.
Chanti
A superb masterpiece of unmitigated projection into 'soul'.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
of luv and horror
of awakenings............Outstanding Poetry!
and sadness wrapped in a colourful lingustic blanket.
Paul;-]
A rite of spring. Excellent!
Your poetry pierces the soul and strips the reader naked. Naked folk may at first feel uncomfortable. Humor makes for a good cover. ;-)
You know, Jerry Bolton's down there in my home state thinking hard. LOL
high going! Perfection!
Eileen
you've got magic in your words.......pax A